GCI/Playtesting/Son of the Black Eye/Challenging

(WIP) Scenario 1: Cutscene: No issues Introductory text: What is meant by "Those orcs don't imagine they are living their last day"? Perhaps something along the lines of "Those orcs shall pay for our ransacked villages" or other might do better. End text: Line 1: "argh! I die!" He is a human, not an orc. It should be I am dying, or I am slain for proper english. Scenario: Overall, not difficult. I noticed that if I send a few wolf riders down the flank, I can capture most enemy villages without any resistance. It might be intent of this level though... The scenario objective was quite clear, and I had no problem figuring out what to do. The dialogue was pretty engaging. I think that some of the in-game text is a bit awkward gramatically, and some times the humans talk like orcs. I had no major challenges meeting this objective. If there was token resistance in the middle keep, it would make it more difficult. Also if there were a few villagers garrisonned near the lower river crossing, to prevent me from capturing all the enemy villages. Fun: 5. Not boring, but it could do with a few twists or challenges. It felt pretty straightforward. Errors: None

Scenario 3: Towards the Mountain of Haag Cutscene: No text in cutscene... Not sure if this is a problem, the scenario was very straightforward. Introductory text: No issues Mid-Text: When first move done: "I've never pushed so far." Slightly awkward. Maybe verb should change to campaigned, or travelled. Mid-Text: Once again, "argh, I die!" from a dwarf. It could be a little more realistic. Scenario: Quite fun. I found it to be moderately easy. I lost a few troops, but it was quite easy. Both objectives were met. The scenario was pretty clear, the dialogue was less engaging, but the scenario was really interesting and provided many paths to beat. I had no major challenges. It was a lot of fun. Fun: 7. Fun and Interesting.

Errors: I went to the NW keep with a wolf rider. I got some troll allies. But for some reason, the finish screen appeared, telling me that I had moved my hero to the signpost, which I did not. Game then continued, and during finish, end screen appeared again.