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Kylix: /* Victory dialogue */

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‎Victory dialogue

Kylix: /* Scenario 12: Stolen Gold */

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‎Scenario 12: Stolen Gold

Kylix: /* Continue */

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‎Continue

Kylix: /* Scenario 16: Epilogue */

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‎Scenario 16: Epilogue

Kylix: /* Scenario 15: Showdown */

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‎Scenario 15: Showdown

Kylix: /* Scenario 15: Showdown */

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‎Scenario 15: Showdown

Kylix: /* Scenario 13: The Eastern Flank */

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‎Scenario 13: The Eastern Flank

Kylix: /* Scenario 12: Stolen Gold */

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‎Scenario 12: Stolen Gold

Kylix: /* Scenario 11: Introductions */

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‎Scenario 11: Introductions

Kylix: /* Scenario 12: Stolen Gold */

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‎Scenario 12: Stolen Gold

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 '''Enemy leader:''' Shut your mouth, you coward!
-===Victory dialogue===
+===Victory dialogue (skipped if Eryssa hadn't been saved)===
 ====Friendly Eryssa====
 '''Hidel:''' Your Highness! We have finally found you! Thank the Bright Gods you are free! Your father had originally sent us to rescue you.

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 We will follow the trail of the trolls; it should lead us back to Rakshas.
-====Hostile Eryssa====
+====Hostile/don't have Eryssa====
 '''Hamel:''' It is well thought. May the Bright Gods be with you.
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 '''Zlex:''' Tell that to the trolls.
-'''Tor:''' What?! Drakes?! Fire! Aagghh!
+'''Enemy leader:''' What?! Drakes?! Fire! Aagghh!
-'''Glu:''' Shut your mouth, you coward!
+'''Enemy leader:''' Shut your mouth, you coward!
-===Leaders defeated===
+===Victory dialogue===
 ====Friendly Eryssa====
 '''Hidel:''' Your Highness! We have finally found you! Thank the Bright Gods you are free! Your father had originally sent us to rescue you.
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 ====Hostile Eryssa====
-'''Himadrin:''' Which one of you rabbe is Tallin?
+'''Himadrin:''' Which one of you rabble is Tallin?
 '''Tallin:''' I am.

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 ====Continue====
-On Father Morvin’s advice, the Council approached all the different orcish tribes and made treaties with them. If a chieftain refused to cooperate with the Alliance, he was forcibly removed from his post and a more favorably-disposed leader put in his place.
+'''Narrator:''' On Father Morvin’s advice, the Council approached all the different orcish tribes and made treaties with them. If a chieftain refused to cooperate with the Alliance, he was forcibly removed from his post and a more favorably-disposed leader put in his place.
 In time, Knalga’s caverns were refurbished, becoming a busy and prosperous home to many dwarves. Under the protection of the Northern Alliance, people of all races began coming, as they did before, from all corners of the known — and unknown — world to trade with the Dwarves of Knalga.

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 '''Tallin:''' So, Rakshas has been defeated and all the armies that he had gathered have been crushed. This relieves a blight on our land — but if we do not address the causes of the blight, we could be in for trouble later.
-'''Eryssa:''' How is that, Tallin?
+'''''Eryssa:''' How is that, Tallin?''
 '''Tallin:''' Rakshas was but a symptom. The ill is the nature of the orcs themselves.
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 The orcs are exceedingly numerous and warlike. While they squabble among themselves, their warlike nature turns upon itself and they are no threat; but when a strong warlord like Rakshas arises among them, their battle-lust becomes a plague upon their neighbors.
-'''Eryssa:''' Our challenge is to ensure that the orcs do not unite under one strong, warlike leader in the future.
+'''Eryssa/Zlex:''' Our challenge is to ensure that the orcs do not unite under one strong, warlike leader in the future.
 '''Tallin:''' Exactly.
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 Father Morvin, this whole plan is your idea. Would you and your wife be willing to stand by my side and support me?
-'''Father Morvin:''' Gladly, Tallin. We will stand with the Warders till the end of days if need be.
+'''Father Morvin:''' Gladly, Tallin. We will stand with the Warders till the end of time if need be.
 ====Have Stalrag====
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 '''Stalrag:''' May your rest be peaceful and undisturbed, Ro’Arthian.
 '''Tallin:''' And Eryssa... I may be rash and bold to ask this but... ''(Goes to his knees in front of Eryssa and takes her hand)'' Will you marry me?
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 After the wedding, Tallin and Eryssa went back to Dwarven Doors where they founded the Council of Warders of the Northern Alliance, a body dedicated to ensuring peace and justice in the Northlands. It was soon settled that the main headquarters of the Northern Alliance would be the new city of Dwarven Doors.
 On Father Morvin’s advice, the Council approached all the different orcish tribes and made treaties with them. If a chieftain refused to cooperate with the Alliance, he was forcibly removed from his post and a more favorably-disposed leader put in his place.
 In time, Knalga’s caverns were refurbished, becoming a busy and prosperous home to many dwarves. Under the protection of the Northern Alliance, people of all races began coming, as they did before, from all corners of the known — and unknown — world to trade with the Dwarves of Knalga.

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 '''Hamel:''' Learn the fate of one who offends the Dwarves of Knalga.
-'''Elenia:''' Or the elves of the Northern Forests.
+'''''Elenia:''' Or the elves of the Northern Forests.''
 '''Zlex:''' Or the humans of Dwarven Doors.

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 ==Scenario 15: Showdown==
 ===Story Text===
-The party once again took up Rakshas’s trail. They soon received a report from a scouting gryphon that in an enormous fortress a few leagues west from them, Rakshas was assembling a massive orcish force, clearly intending to crush their revolt once and for all.
+The party once again took up Rakshas’ trail. They soon received a report from a scouting gryphon that in an enormous fortress a few leagues west from them, Rakshas was assembling a massive orcish force, clearly intending to crush their revolt once and for all.
 The gryphon further reported that a few more leagues west was a large force of dwarvish veterans, advancing steadily on the orcish fortress.
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 '''Narrator:''' The group that went to the north was led by Krash and his drake friends.
-Eryssa and the remaining elves, eager to avenge Hidel, went south, while Tallin himself led the western group.
+====Have Eryssa====
 A few short hours later all the groups converged on the fortress.
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 '''Rakshas:''' What the...? How did he get here?
 '''Eryssa:''' We have crushed and scattered your entire eastern flank, and now it’s your turn!
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 '''Rakshas:''' Hahahahah! You fools, do you not see that you are right in the heart of orcish territory, surrounded yourselves! Why, at this very moment my entire western army is marching this way. They will soon be here and will scatter your forces like straw!
 '''Hamel:''' Will they, now?
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 '''Camerin:''' FOR FUN!
-'''Eryssa:''' FOR HIDEL!!
+'''''Eryssa:''' FOR HIDEL!!''
 '''Zlex:''' FOR DWARVEN DOORS!!

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 '''Tallin:''' Gods of Light! Look at that fortress. The castle Angthurim is even grimmer than its reputation.
 '''Eryssa:''' I was not idle in my captivity; I watched, and listened, and learned. The hints I got from my guards’ boastings and foul jests have been confirmed by our scouts; Angthurim is the linchpin of their entire eastern flank. If we could reduce it, their defense would be near to collapse.
 '''Zlex:''' Hey, look who is here!
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 '''Rakshas:''' Bah! I have better things to do than stamp out your insignificant life. Generals, kill him and bring me his head!
 '''Tallin:''' Blast it! The coward has fled. Eryssa, your elves are good at moving quickly through the forests. Do you think they can overtake and pin him down while we deal with this fortress?
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 '''Hidel:''' ''(Raises eyebrow)'' Very well, my lady.
 '''Tallin:''' Ro’Arthian, send a message to Hamel. Tell him it’s time.
 '''Ro’Arthian:''' It’s done.
-'''Tallin:''' Very well. Forward! Victory or death!
+'''Tallin:''' Very well. Forwards! Victory or death!
 '''Krash:''' Come on boys, let’s give it to ’em!
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 '''Sister Thera:''' Awww, aren’t they the most loving, sharing bunch of orcs you have ever seen?
-'''Eryssa:''' ''(Snicker)''
+'''''Eryssa:''' ''(Snicker)''''
 ===Victory Dialogue===
 '''Tallin:''' We have torn the heart from their eastern defences.
 '''Tallin:''' Now let us make haste to rescue Hidel. I am uneasy for him; some of those bodyguards Rakshas keeps are fell fighters.
 ==Scenario 14: Get the Gold==

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 '''Eryssa:''' Now that we are well shot of that dungeon, do you mind telling me who you are?
-===Have Elenia===
+====Have Elenia====
 '''Elenia:''' Sister! Don't you recognize me?
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 '''Tallin:''' Sounds good - I mean, let it be so.
-===Don't have Elenia===
+====Don't have Elenia====
 '''Tallin:''' Not at all. I am Tallin, from the human town of Dwarven Doors. Together with the Dwarvish Lord Hamel, the mage Ro'Arthian and his brother, we are attempting to restore peace and freedom to Knalga.

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 '''Hamel:''' Aye. Well I ken it, Tallin.
 '''Tallin:''' Were you able to pursue them?
 '''Hamel:''' Och, we tried, Tallin, but with the orcs still pressing our southern defences and other groups of trolls trying to break through everywhere, we simply ha' not the manpower.
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 '''Tallin:''' Then we shall pursue them. Even if we don't catch them then we might be able to hit Rakshas before he has had a chance to put all that gold to good use.
-Hamel, rally the dwarves and prepare to make an all--out offensive against the orcs. It's time to give them some of their own.
+Hamel, rally the dwarves and prepare to make an all-out offensive against the orcs. It's time to give them some of their own.
 We will follow the trail of the trolls; it should lead us back to Rakshas.
-Eryssa, what news of the elves?
+===Hostile Eryssa===
 '''Eryssa:''' Our gryphons have reached them. They are no more than a few days march from us.
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 I will send another message to them asking them to send scouts to locate the trolls who took your gold. Mayhap the elves will be able to get between the trolls and their allies.
 '''Tallin:''' So it shall be. Hamel, when I make contact with the orcs I'll send you a message. When you get it, come at all speed. It is near time for the battle that will decide all.
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 '''Tallin:''' All right, let's move out, everyone!
-Thus the party set off to the northern tunnels to pursue the trolls.
+'''Narrator:''' Thus the party set off to the northern tunnels to pursue the trolls.
 They met but light resistance all along the trail of the trolls, which they quickly overcame.
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 ===Leaders defeated===
 '''Hidel:''' Your Highness! We have finally found you! Thank the Bright Gods you are free! Your father had originally sent us to rescue you.
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 '''Tallin:''' Very well, everyone. The road ahead is clear, onwards to victory!
 ==Scenario 13: The Eastern Flank==